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Introduction narration describing how the ancient gods are actually aliens on earth to harvest the universally rare and precious metal, gold. It then further explains how the aliens have engeneered humans to be their slaves and have trained a rece of humans, the Atlantians to be the day to day overseers of the operations.

Part  One
Ishtar arrives in Atlantis to investigate why they have not sent their regular report. Upon arriving the godess is met by the rebel forces and captured. She breaks free and  duels the king of Atlantis. Ishtar is defeated and finds herself being carbon frozen, her statuesque form erected in the former temple to the gods.

Interlude One
The gods discuss the rebellion and decide to send the ceyborg  agent Sekhmet  to secure their important space port in Egypt.

Part Two : Clash of the cyborgs
The cyborg supersoldier Karna arrives in Egypt with orders from resistance leaders to take over the space port, however standing in his way is the terminator like Sekhmet, the two of them engage in a fierce battle, ultimately Karna defeats the agent of the gods and secures the saceport for the rebel fleet.

Interlude Two
The gods discuss their recent loss, Enlil suggeasts  that restraint can no longer be shown when dealing with the humans.  Athena declares that the ultimate Space Battleship Krishnaa is complete but left in the hands of their loyal human follower Admiral Arjuna.  It is decided to allow the humans to crew the ultimate battleship.

Part Three: The Space Battleship Krishna
Admiral arjuna broods over the fact that his beloved wife is in the hands of his mortal enemies, who have turned against the gods themselves.  It is then that he recieves the holograph message from the gods to pursue the enemy fleet with their flagship the supreme weapon of godhead Krishna.  Admiral arjuna launches the Krishnaa but as he aproaches the rebel human fleet converses with the ship AI about his misgivings with siding against his fellow humans in this war., noting that many of the men in the rebel fleet are his relatives.  The battle rages in space and as the Admiral gives in to his doubts Krishna fires the Vishnu canon of it's own accord wiping out the rebel fleet.  Just then Karna beams onto the bridge of the Krishnaa with a few serviving warriors in tow, he informs arjuna that his atack killed his own wife who was prisoner abord one of the ships.  Karna's  party includes the King of Atlantis who leads a charge against the crew.  The king and company shoot their way to the control panel Karna and Admiral Arjuna battle to the death.  

Interlude Three
Discuss the progress of the battle and  even though they are winning Enlil, discusted with the ungratefulness of the humans declares that he will wipe them all out with the cosmic cannon. The other gods protest but Enlil has made up his mind and refuses to back down even when threatened with bringing in the Galactic authority.  

Part Four: The Cosmic cannon
The Krishna docks with the celestial  space station. The guards are confused as the ship does not respond to radio communicatoins.  Inside the ship te King of Atlantis stands over the bodies of Karna and Arjuna who killed each other in their desperate struggle.  He considers the waste and then activates Krishna's self destruct device as he and his men beam abord the station.  The station is rocked by the powerful explosion and is in chaos. The king leads his men to the palace of the gods and blasts his way in. Once inside he is met by robots who kill his men and take him alive.  The king is then brought to the chamber of Enlil who forces him to watch as the celestial cannon fires and melts the polar ice caps.  Then Enlil tells the king that he will grant him immortality so that he can live forever knowing that he spelled doom for his civilization.

Interlude Four
Two hours  before the cannon is fired Inki sends out  a message to the humans of earth warning of the coming disaster.  He tells them to board their largest boats and to head for high ground  as far inland as they can.  He knows it isnt enough but it is all he can do.

Part Five: The Fall of Atlantis
The atlantians panic as the flood is sure to destroy them. There are riots in the streets as men and women battle each other physically for spots on any of the evacuation ships. In the chaos one man fights to free the godess that he loves from her frozen prison in time to save her.  Ishtar is freed but there is little time to reach her cloaked ship, the two battle against the odds as the city crumbles around them.  Soon the water is upon them and as they reach the ship they learn that others have found it and are trying to get in.  Ishtar and her new lover battle the mob and reach her ship but a strey shot leaves the man who had freed her dead. The godess must leave without him but vows that no matter how many more lovers she has she will not forget his name.

Interlude Five
The Gods Storm Enlil's chambers and inki duels him for the control panel. Once Inki wins he shuts it off and informs Inlil that humans are now classified as a developing species and can no longer be wiped out or enslaved.

Final Part: Rise of the savages
Enlils actions brought about an end to a great age of technology but they aslo it seems ended the ice age that left continents frozen. A band of savages is met by refugees from Atlantis who struggle to adapt to their primative ways whilst teaching the savages about agriculture. The savage leader butts heads with the leader of the refugees but eventually comes to respect him as his equal and offers his daughter as a bride.

Epilogue: Ending narration describing how the Atlantian refugees became the founders of known civilization.
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